Looking back on my work and my approach to my revising early in this semester to my first and final drafts of these projects.  In my first draft, I changed minor changes more local rather than global information. Now that we are on our final project I have realized that I have changed more global changes. I have focused more on my sentence structure and connecting my paragraphs together and making them flow better. Taking a look at project three I have written more smartly this time around when I have a paragraph on my mind I write it down and label it as possible paragraph and leave it for the end to see where I can put it in. This time around I has also used keywords to connect my paragraphs together better and to keep the reader focused on my main points. To keep having them circle back around to my main idea when they are reading my essay. When my revisions have happened we mainly talked about how to make the essay flow better and how to clearly state a thesis to make it more clear to the readers my opinion and where I see the essay going. We also always normally talked about how to make the essays flow better to make sure the paragraphs have enough detail but aren’t choppy sentences or run-on sentences. I feel my development over time of my revision process has also improved, I feel the information I can give to my peers is better information.