Looking back on the work that I have done on paper 3 I feel like my revision we just had helped me a lot to see the little things that I can change to improve my essay a lot. Going through my essay with the people who revised it, I made my thesis more clear and when I got stuck where to put a paragraph in I just wrote the paragraph out and than I saved it for after to see where I should put it in. I rewrote a little bit of my first two paragraphs I started to use keywords to connect my paragraph ideas together with one another. I think this revision helped me most and thinking back on this essay this process was better than my other revisions went.