Grace Tutt 

Journal #15

Project 2 was better than the first project. When starting this essay though I felt kind of lost on where to start having to have the 4 sources it was alright there in front of you but I had to somehow think of a way to connect all of these essays together to support my point. So, I printed out all my sources papers and I annotated them and highlighted the quotes I was going to use and where I thought they’d fit best in my essay. I felt as if the peer review went better and there was better feedback as we have all done it once before already and knew what we should be doing. This time I went back and really focused on my sentences and cutting out information that wasn’t needed. I feel the lifespan of this project had more effort and I knew what I needed to do better this time I knew I needed to connect my paragraphs better to one another and focus on things like topic sentences and making a clear thesis. I also printed out my essay this time to read it out loud and erase information that wasn’t important for my essay.